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Old 11-19-2012, 03:48 AM   #204
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Originally Posted by AteamNM View Post
hey inmates.

I finished my rode report and it is a good effort as a newbie both in adventure riding as well as adventure writing. I followed this thread and have read many reports. My photography could never compete with Dave's but my $100 dollar camera did OK. I hope it turns out well, it does have a tragic sort of ending. I share myself, exposed and raw I reckon.

http://advrider.com/forums/showthread.php?t=841561

Take a look and let me know what you all think. Comments on the rode report re very welcome. It was a lot of work to do it sort of proper.

Thanks - ATEAM
I liked it, a reasonable balance of text vs pictures, told the story of the ride. A couple of comments - I'd stick to the default font offered by ADV, that larger, bolder, font you've chosen sticks out like a sore thumb IMO.

And "donned" not "dawned".
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